Tuesday, January 16, 2018

The Snowman {Creative Writing - Story}

By Eva & Panna, 5th grade

Based on the pictures in Raymond Briggs's "The Snowman." 

1:Ethan  woke up and looked out the window, and he started to dress up. He went for his mum.”Mum, can I go outside? Please!” And his mum said yes. And Ethan said "HURRAY!!!" He went to pick up his boots. He went outside. And he ran in to the snow.

2: Ethan started to make a snowman and the snowman got bigger and bigger...  His mum said  "Come and have some tea." He goes to finish his snowman. 

3: He went to his mum and said "Mum please give me a hat and a scarf because I want to decorate the snowman." And after he finished decorating his snowman reanimated. 

4: And then the day turned to night. His mum called t0 Ethan to come in the house.    
And he slept.

5: And  when he woke up, he jumped out from the bed. And he went to the garden to say "Hello" to the snowman. And the snowman said, "Hello" to Ethan.

6:He said, "Come in to my house!" "Thank you Ethan!" And then the snowmen came into the house. And Ethan showed around the snowman.

7: And Ethan showed everything  to the snowman. The snowman was amazed by the things in the house.

8: They went to his mum and dad’s bedroom, and Ethan showed to the snowman his parents.

9:And the snowman dressed up like Ethan’s dad.

10: And they went to the garden.

11: And  by the snowman’s magic they can fly into the air.

12: And the snowman showed the town to Ethan.

13:The snowman and Ethan flew down.

14: And they were at Ethan's garden after the town showing.

15: The snowman gives a hug to Ethan, and the snowman says "Goodbye."

16: After that Ethan came in his house and started to sleep.  

17: In the morning Ethan wakes up and he runs down the stairs.

18: And Ethan runs out from the house to see his snowman…


19:And when he goes out to the garden he sees the snowman’s  life is ended.

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